I agree with tokingfire.
The plot was basically non-existent. The art was all ripped except for those little energy bubble things (I pray you didn't borrow those also).
This is such a waste of your time and your audiences' time.
You ought to make something that is actually made by you not just a bunch of art ripped from the archives. Also putting some thought into a real plot and real story development would do your flashes a great service. This flash is a mockery, and the fact that its score remains above zero and that it has been front paged are greatly disturbing.