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At first I was gonna rate this a four (partly because there's been so many flashes like this one) but the part during the credits was freaking hilarious
5/5
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At first I was gonna rate this a four (partly because there's been so many flashes like this one) but the part during the credits was freaking hilarious
5/5
funny
a climatic battle ending with a kick to the nuts... never gets old lol
audio could really use some work. The music was too loud and sounded like it might have been recorded from a radio or something. Also the voices were scratchy.
what?
I have no idea what I just watched but I am neither amused or entertained in any way.
The animation was pretty smooth but the voices were very scratchy and annoying.
*shakes head*
no voice acting. pretty much no animation. it looked like almost nothing was originally created by you (except for the half-assed script).
I figured because it was in the daily feature it would be decent at the very least but I guess anything is good enough to be featured on NG nowadays
No animation? You missed Donald Duck, dude.
While I did not create these characters I created this hilarious world of their's.
I can't comment about that last bit. That is personal opinion. There are many unseen gems out there though, such as "Donkey Kong Lifts Mario" and "Marrio Porn Party"
great writing
Decent story and writing. The story was interesting and I look forward to the rest.
My only suggestion if you are going to keep this format in your submissions, make illustrations that actually correlate to the current page. I felt that the background had absolutely nothing to do with the story.
On top of that it was poorly colored. It looked like a kinder gardener's art homework (okay maybe a little better than that).
And the music was a little annoying after a while. I'd suggest adding music that matches the mood of the story or just removing it and adding narrations or something.
Thanks for you responses/reviews everyone. I promise I have, in return for your time, taken every suggestion into fair and equal consideration.
Thanks again for your time. =)
lol
funniest one yet.
The joke was well delivered as well as unexpected...
on second thought this is NG so I should've seen the porn joke cumming *erhm* I mean coming :3 lol
anyways good job.
Haha nice pun, thanks for the review :)
PITO!
this flash is flawless
ignore fags like Tyrannosaurus100 that blam perfection
Thanks! :)
sweeeet
Nice to see a stick animation that ISN'T a dbz style fight for once
unoriginal
heard it thousands of times before
lol ye it some what funny.
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